A lousy excuse for poetry

Lights twinkling in a sea of night
Like fireflies darting to and fro
The roar of the ocean down the open road
Reminds me that off to bed I should go

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2 Responses to “A lousy excuse for poetry”

  1. Actually, Paleck, I think your poem shows that you have a good ear and a good sense of meter.

    You ought to write poetry more often (said the pot to the kettle ;-) ).

    Dennis

  2. Paleck says:

    I think the kettle just cracked and some pigs flew by the window. ;)